Thread started: Nov 20 2008, 5:57 AM EST
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Juli, in section 3, customers can make mobile payments using infrared-red technology or is it just infrared technology?
Also, regarding the restaurant reservation service, are you referring to a particular restaurant or any restaurant? If it is a particular restaurant, maybe you could name it or otherwise, change the way the sentence is written.
Also, do let me know once you are done with these edits as well as section 5...Thanx.
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