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sashikala
sashikala
Edits to be made
Nov 20 2008, 5:57 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 20 2008, 5:57 AM EST
Juli, in section 3, customers can make mobile payments using infrared-red technology or is it just infrared technology?

Also, regarding the restaurant reservation service, are you referring to a particular restaurant or any restaurant? If it is a particular restaurant, maybe you could name it or otherwise, change the way the sentence is written.

Also, do let me know once you are done with these edits as well as section 5...Thanx.

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Juliyanti
Juliyanti
1. RE: Edits to be made
Nov 21 2008, 2:23 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 21 2008, 2:23 AM EST
yep, my bad. it is infrared technology.
secondly, i made the changes. the restaurant name is 'tgif'. there was a bit of grammatical error there.
added some stuff in section 5, which is now section 6, as well.
coz ive added another new section on mobile tv in south korea. do take a look when u can!
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sashikala
sashikala
2. RE: Edits to be made
Nov 21 2008, 3:31 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 21 2008, 3:31 AM EST
ok done dear Do you find this valuable?